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by UrbanRascal from NY, United States
Challenge > Childhood Story
Submitted on 26th Jun 2010
Comments : 13 comment(s)
Voted by : 36 People
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About My Design
Pinocchio to me was always a bit creepy.
fuzzzzz commented on 19th Sep 2010 (Report Spam)
MiBo2 commented on 1st Aug 2010 (Report Spam)
i like it =)
puddyCat commented on 24th Jul 2010 (Report Spam)
This should've been added to the finished Pinocchi page, not posted twice. That's what PT rules say.
AndyWh commented on 21st Jul 2010 (Report Spam)

could use more work, doesn't look very finished

Dreamkeepers commented on 6th Jul 2010 (Report Spam)

Thanks for adding the revised version!  I like your choice of subdued hues with the colors you chose, like the grayish blue of the shorts and the black for the tie.  What I'm trying to say is that a lot of people make the mistake of mixing the brightest reds and greens when coloring their line art, and it looks like you put thought into your color palette and/or have a lot of experience in illustration.  I wish you best of luck! 

UrbanRascal commented on 6th Jul 2010 (Report Spam)

Dreamkeeper: Thanks. I'm glad you like my art

I agree with most comments. I have added a colored version and I adjusted the strings to hang down. They work as a piece of art but not as a toy. Let me know what you guys think.

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UrbanRascal commented on 6th Jul 2010 (Report Spam)

Colored study

Dreamkeepers commented on 2nd Jul 2010 (Report Spam)
Holy Cow! Your artwork is awesome, I saw the detail in the thumbnail, but now I'm really blown away by your talent. I'm not sure how some of the details would work out in your design, specifically the strings, but with a little color, you're on the right path!
Zilo commented on 29th Jun 2010 (Report Spam)

The style is interesting, but as said - it could benefit from color. Unless the design was meant to be in black and white in final production. The view given at the moment is hard to plot out as a toy since there are strings shooting off the page - which would be fine for a staged view, but for a toy design it's probably helpful to also include panels that show the whole toy.

Nadesican commented on 28th Jun 2010 (Report Spam)
This seems stuck somewhere between creepy and cute. I think if you really want to push the creepy, you might have to make that wood a little less "new"
Kannaya commented on 28th Jun 2010 (Report Spam)
This is creepy but I like it. Does need color unless you are doing a diy version.
Picamadew commented on 27th Jun 2010 (Report Spam)

I agree that adding a colour image would be really great but also a sketch to show more of how the final figure will look. Will it have the strings hanging from something?

bpg commented on 27th Jun 2010 (Report Spam)

it would benefit from a colored image, unless you're intending for the final product to be colorless as well.

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