This is adorable - you should try a more dynamic pose and then I would definitely purchase it. Playing with yarn was a considerable previous suggestion. ;3

thank you for the crits! ;u; I'll tery to keep that in mind for next time haha

Needs more life! Try some different poses for it. I'd love to see it crawing on something or playing with yarn or a ball. Needs interaction!

Not exactly the most unique thing I've seen.

It needs more shape/form to it.
Right now it seems really.. blah.

Good luck though :)